i like the rythm and structure but try to be more creative...see dnb song is based on the drums more then ear piercing synth.build your song around the drums.
Yeah more of a jungle or possibly breakbeat track on that note, I'll have to see what I make next; lost most of my drum instruments and have to remake them
check out hofi8 & DjNaviRu
i made same kind of the songs u can hear my progress from beginnining to the end
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